Take some silver out of the top half of the face and make it a bit more green. Maybe make the feet more wing like. Actually, make the feet a bit more bug like, like an insect or an arachnid. Other than, you've nailed it.
ahahah....it dosen't actually say that anywhere, but okay (wipes sweat off neck)..and the right arm has funny porportions..the "rocket fist" i sugggested fails cause its forearm thrusters unbalaced...can it fly? the shoulders might be an obstruction and the swords too much weight..hows it gonna hold its "heavy" swords during flight...?
Not only that, but the head looks like it could fly off(with the wings and pointy golden bit)...not unlike Mazinger Z. that jet pack seems to be influenced by a gundam...Awesome job, combined with the good old "impossible cylinder" limbs. at first ppl just did the limbs at angles that did not show the joint, but then later made up the segments(yours has special, kinda halo-spartan segments)+wing zero shoulders
Jademan! Ganda nito ah!Iba sa iba mong designs and may mukha! Reminds me of Gravion! Oo nga pala Jade lmbas na ba sa atin yung SRW Z,Thank God for PS2 console sya! mukhang maganda ah and dami bago super robots sa line up nya...hope ma download ko sya later on.hehehehe! Dapat later in the future include nila si Gurren Lagann or si Kikaioh! That would be a blast! Heato Blazaaaa!!!
Chard! Hehe, practice ako gumuwa ng super robot para di ako maipit sa iisang style. Meron na SRWZ pero di ako kukuha, hindi ako masyadong natuwa sa lineup. Kay Nirvash at sa Aquarion lang ako natuwa. Alam mo naman na REAL ROBOT FAN ako eh, biro mo isali ba naman ulit yung Gundam X saka Turn A (Syd Mead is good, but his design of the Turn A Gundam is... Well... Sobrang overrated din yung nanomachine tech...) Medyo wierd rin yung storya eh (Medyo nabadtrip ako sa Namco Bandai, mga mukha kasing pera). Bagong team systems na medyo komplikado at bagong story parang yung ginawa nila sa Alpha series (Still the best in my opinion along with OG). Antayin ko na lang masali yung Gundam 00 saka Macross Frontier...
Jade!I'm playing MX recently and malayo na ako eh parang ang boring ang pacing ng story, not like yung SRWA2 and SRWA3, tlgng very exciting kada chapters nya...ang TAGAL lng super sobra tapusin, after ko ng matapos yung buong game sabi ko pause na muna ako sa mga SRW games kasi baka mag sawa ako. Sa akin ok naman yung lineup ng SRWZ kasi madaming bago na hindi ko pa napapanood sa anime yung iba sa series don.Gulat ako nan don si Big-O eh! Yes Roger Smith!hehehehehe! As for your drawing keep up the good work mate!Carry on!